Oh this was wonderful! I like the pure realism of the sex and emotions between the two.
Author's Response: Thanks!
My favorite arsenic,
Gawww, this is just, it makes me feel verbally inadequate. I usually am blown away by the intelligence of the dialogue, the poignancy of the emotions, but grrrr. I'm stunned by how you set this up, each brief piece it's own window into the relationship, yet, they also work together, fitting together to tell the deeper story hinted at all along. Impressive isn't a big enough word. Especially when I'm reading this and you are juxtaposing mikey's kneeling posture with his gentle, not tentative, but demure? dominance and Frank's attentive response. Well, words escape me,
An adoring fangirl
Author's Response: Hi looloo! Wheee! It makes me so happy when the peeps who have been around for forever still enjoy my stuff. I'm really surprised by Mikey in this series, but oh I just love him, just LOVE him so.
mikey has stolen my words, to replace the ones that frank took.
it was so nice to see them together again, so so nice. but also different, the slight shifts in their interactions. i couldn't name them, now, but i sense that they are there. i'll have to go re-read the earlier bits, to compare again.
Author's Response: Oh yeah, they're there. Hee. OMG, I have so much love for them and all that's coming, it's EMBARRASSING.
THERE IS SO MUCH JOY IN MY HEART, YOU HAVE NO IDEA.
That is all.
Thank you for completing my night.
Author's Response: Hee, ever so glad to help with that. *grins at your heart*
You can't imagine how hooked I am on this series. I dig through my flist for new stuff every day. And it's wonderful.
Author's Response: YAY!!! (Probably about half as hooked as I am. I want to weep when I don't have time to write it. I'm not even kidding. It is a sad, sad state of affairs.) *hugs you to pieces*