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Reviewer: Jason Washington Anonymous Date: 22/04/17 - 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

I have seen also such people in my life who are dare enough to take risks with their lives. But like you I also don’t say that this is bravery in actual it is stupidity. Hope now Neal will treat himself a little bit more do my assignment australia important and take care of him. As this is the only right way of living.

Reviewer: asiajournal Anonymous Date: 02/08/14 - 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

I felt sorry for Neal for had to endured the "torture" of the headache. Though i think Peter should have known considering that he had experience being fused and all for years now. If he's not sure, he should have tried to find out, to make sure.

Though I'm glad he knows now, though.

Neal is also.. kind of silly if not stupid for not telling. He should want to take care of himself. I think he valued himself too low.

El said that it's torture. I love how her concern and horor were implied in there.

I hope they would take care of each other now.


Anyway, love your fics. I'm off to find more. Thanks a lot for sharing!!!

Reviewer: embroiderama Anonymous Date: 07/01/11 - 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, I love this idea, and the way you wrote it for the characters is gorgeous.

Author's Response: Thank you! I kind of fell in love with this universe, tbh.

Reviewer: Ivorysilk Anonymous Date: 27/12/10 - 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

I know you said not to think too hard about the science, but I'm not that type anyway--which is to say, I *adored* this--I loved all the risks Neal was taking here, and I love that Peter too some too, albeit more tempered ones. And Elizabeth as their center was fantastic--I love her threatening Neal. I am desperate to have more in this 'verse--and so I hope you get the urge to write a sequel!

Author's Response: I'm going to PM you on LJ, b/c I have a feeling you won't see this response.

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